2013년 1월 9일 수요일

ODE TO MY CELLPHONE


  Dear my cellphone,

  I met you just 1 year ago.
  My mother took me to a store where your friend and you were being sold last winter.
  I did not know I would meet you and make a friend with you.
  When my mom made you be my friend, I was very happy because as you know, you          
  were the latest model of the phones that many students wanted to get at that time.




  Then I took you home excitedly, and you became my 'best friend'.
  We are always together and you helped me a lot of things.

  You helped me to connect with other people even though they were very far away from
  me.
  You are a silent friend, so I can open my heart and tell you the things that are difficult to
  say out.
  So I thank you very much, my dear cellphone.

  You helped me to study much easier.
  You are a very smart dictionary.So when I have some problems with some words,I can
  find them from your body and I can understand them easily.
  Also you are a teacher,too.
  I really appreciate you!

 
 
  You helped me relax myself.
  I really needed you to play the games with your body.
  It was really excited to play the games because your body is really big and easy to touch.
  You also helped me to leave many memories by taking the photos whenever I want to
  memorize the instants.
  And I could take some notes with the photos.
 
  There are too many things to thank you.
  Please continue to stay with me, or I will miss you very much~~!!^^

댓글 2개:

  1. Ji Young,

    The presentation of this blog is very good. I like how you used a video and pictures in your post. To make the ode more poetic try using personifications and more repetition.

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  2. Hi!
    This is a nice ode to your cellphone. You also presented this ode very well by using pictures and videos. Keep up the good work~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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